The talent's there, I just think the execution is off. The paint job is WAAAAY too clean, reminds me of Medicom's attempt. The hair really needs to be worked on too. Like I said, the talent's obviously there. If you achieved the look you were going for, great job. It's just too neat for me.
Great work, especially on the mouth and scars... The rest of the face and the eyes in particular seem too dark, it needs a little more white in my opinion... Anyway that's a very nice work, especially for the shadowing on the lips and the general realism... Well done!