Well done DP, keep in going! Just read chapter 4, looking forward to going back and reading all four chapters again and seeing how they flow. u should be very proud of what you're doing, keep up the good work!
Thanks Bid!
I'm going to try to get Chapter 5 out pretty soon too. It might happen today, even, but most likely tomorrow or the next day.
I'm glad I finally got un-stumped about how to move the story forward! The first couple of times I wrote Chapter 4, Kyrr ends up crashing his speeder on purpose, getting seriously hurt, and essentially knocking on the door of some random building, where there just
happens to be a doctor, who gives him medical treatment for his injuries.
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I realized how silly that was, and completely rewrote the chapter several times. Once I even had Kyrr pull an 'Anakin Skywalker' and jump off his speeder onto someone else's, to steal it and fly to the spaceport. Of course, that sounds ridiculous as well, because getting hit with a moving speeder with almost nothing to grab on to couldn't possibly end well for a non-force sensitive character.
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But I figured jumping onto an open gunship platform made a lot more sense, and was finally the right way to go.
If I had gotten it right the first time, I could have written to at least chapter 8 or so by now!
this is getting so long now, I think I'm going to go and add links to the different chapters to make it easier to navigate.